Essay Review Report
Overall Score
82 / 100Clear thesis and coherent structure; strengthen analysis depth and transitions.
Sectional Breakdown
Structure & Organization
4 / 5Strengths
- Introduction previews main claims effectively.
- Paragraphs follow a logical sequence.
Areas to Improve
- Topic sentences could more clearly connect to the thesis.
- Transitions between body paragraphs are sometimes abrupt.
Thesis & Claims
3 / 5Strengths
- Thesis makes a clear, arguable claim.
- Claims are generally supported by evidence.
Areas to Improve
- Clarify the scope and limitations of the main claim.
- Ensure each body paragraph advances a distinct sub-claim.
Evidence & Analysis
3 / 5Strengths
- Includes specific references to the text.
- Attempts to connect evidence to claims.
Areas to Improve
- Explain how the evidence supports the claim (avoid summary only).
- Integrate quotations smoothly with analysis.
Important Missing Items
- Explicit counterargument and rebuttal section.
- In-text citations for all referenced sources.
- Concluding synthesis that revisits implications.
Summary Recommendations
- Revise topic sentences to forecast each paragraph's claim.
- Add transitions that explicitly connect ideas between paragraphs.
- Deepen analysis by explaining how evidence supports claims.
- Include a brief counterargument and rebuttal section.